Just a dream

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Kaibod (Generic Zoner) on Sunday, 02-Jan-2011 20:51:52

Sometimes I lay in my bed ....
And thoughts of you go through my head.
I don't know why ....
But All of a sudden I start to cry.
Because of a dream I had.
No the dream wasn't bad.
The dream was about you and me.
And it hurt to find out it was just a dream.

The dream was about just us two.
Just doing what we always do.
Talking and laughing and having a good time.
You just smiling, and me with “Wow!” Going through my mind.
Then we started to run in a field.
We fell down and rolled and our lips both became sealed.
That warm passionate kiss that makes me become weak.
That feeling I get that won’t let me speak.
We just stayed there for a good while.
Then I pulled back and saw your bright, tender smile.

But the images started to become blurry!
I started to become full of fear and worry.
What was happening, why was the image fading.
This is crazy and so frustrating!
I laid there watching you fade away.
Wanting for this moment to stay.
But it just kept fading away.
And in my bed, there I laid.

Then, I started to cry.
I just let the tears run out my eyes.
I couldn’t believe this wasn’t true.
I wish you knew how much I want you.
How much I want that dream to be real.
How bad right now I feel.
The wanting you is sickening.
I just keep on thinking.
Why couldn’t that dream have been reality.
Why did my feelings play with me completely.
Why are my feelings playing games.
Then I softly whisper your name.
Then the tears start streaming down more.
I cry and cry until my eyes become sore.
I can’t believe Im feeling this way.
I don’t know what else to say.
So I set in my bed and just weep.
Then eventually I cry myself back to sleep.

Sometimes I lay in my bed ....
And thoughts of you go through my head.
I don't know why ....
But All of a sudden I start to cry.
Because of a dream I had.
No the dream wasn't bad.
The dream was about you and me.
And it hurt to find out it was just a dream.

Post 2 by MadnessPersonified (Newborn Zoner) on Thursday, 10-Feb-2011 23:31:18

david, this is beautiful! :')

Post 3 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Friday, 11-Feb-2011 5:51:48

good job baby bro

Post 4 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Friday, 11-Feb-2011 8:40:18

I know the feeling... good job. :d